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Talmon

Published: Jun 20, 2016

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Description

Talmon is Aleena's partner in my story Digimon: Solstice Reprieve. He's a Rabbit-Man Digimon and his special attack is Seven Dragon Magic (shown) where he summons seven ghostly dragons to ensnare his opponents. His biggest flaw is how easily he gets overexcited and a bad habit of his is to constantly compare life to movies he's seen.

I got lazy towards the end on the grass (as is obvious on the right). The background was just a quick thing really though to try and make it more animated as my art always looks so 2D (I think it still does here tbh). Any tips or advice would really help ^_^

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Digishade11

Jan 6, 2020

I mean this was made ages ago now and these are my own opinions on how I think things should look so I'm just saying why it looks weird specifically to me, for starters the head looks too close to a normal rabbit for my liking, I've been reading your story and the main thing that comes to mind is that he uses his ears as limbs so I've been picturing him with his ears ending with finger like tips probably more like three bluntish claws though I really have no idea on where I would take the colour though in the end this is you character if YOU are happy with it then it's fine especially because a digimon can look like or be made out of literally anything